Post by shocky ! on Feb 17, 2011 14:23:00 GMT -8
First off, your appearance is far too short. Try to at least double it in length. Secondly, you may want to do a spelling and grammar check over your bio. Thirdly, she's quiet, shy, sweet, but also grouchy and sharp with her tongue? Those things don't fit to me, but she's your cat.
So just fix it up ahead and I'll accept it (: